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http://youtu.be/AArIHxTd3RQ

I just made a sitcom.  I'd love it if you checked it out and left some sweet feedback.  It's about 5 guys that live together and encounter socially awkward situations.

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Permalink Reply by Lily Boob on December 28, 2011 at 11:35am

The laugh track was played in the weirdest places. It made it seem like more of an awkward laugh than a "ha-ha" funny situation. Your show really reminded me of the show Greek's Kappa house.

Permalink Reply by JBudd on December 28, 2011 at 1:38pm

I actually premiered this in front of 77 students (we counted :) ) and we recorded the audio of them laughing, then I used that as a guide where to put in the laughs, and how intense of a laugh to use.  So it reflects when an actual audience laughed.  

I think the problem is some of the laughs I used sound goofy, or are too loud.

Permalink Reply by Coyote Tits on December 28, 2011 at 4:40pm

I loved Greek. The Kappa's were adorable. I don't know why I couldn't find frat boys like that when I was in college!

Permalink Reply by Lily Boob on December 28, 2011 at 4:46pm

I loved them too! So it was actually something I liked about the pilot.  I miss Greek.

 

Permalink Reply by Rocket on December 31, 2011 at 8:25pm

Me three! I needs a dose of Beaver!!! :(

Permalink Reply by Stephanie Iris on December 30, 2011 at 9:21pm

I think the reason there are no college sitcoms is because The Real World and other reality TV shows have an abundance of real 20-somethings willing to make fools of themselves for free on TV.

Anyway, the episode kept me interested until the end so that's a good thing. And I would have watched more if there was more.

The only character I really liked was Taylor and the guy who didn't say much. I felt Burke was a bit overdone and I felt like Rob was an unnecessary character, he didn't add anything to the episode and all his jokes were add ons to Cliff's jokes. 

And the whole pregnant lady thing was bizarre and a bit unrealistic. Tone her down a bit perhaps?

But overall I would watch a second episode. And I didn't think the canned laughter was that bad.

Permalink Reply by JBudd on December 31, 2011 at 1:54pm

thanks.  Taylor is my favorite.  My current plans are to kill off Birk and sam, and maybe Matt.  Elizabeth won't be a main character, kinda like Newman was on Seinfeld.  Cliff could do better, it was his first time acting and we didn't have any rehearsals and he didn't have his lines memorized so he wasn't as natural as he could be.

Thanks for watching!

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