The Bloggers With The Most To Say
Will dance for feedback and suggestions.
Hi all,
I have noticed an increase of traffic to my blog since joining 20SB, so thanks to all who have checked out my blog. I would love some feedback (even criticism) so I can make it better. It is a personal blog by nature, I post stuff I think about and have learned so far in life.
Also, I just posted a new post (a poem) today: http://deftlylistening.wordpress.com/
Thank you!
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Permalink Reply by morganandkim on -
I just had a quick scan of your blog.
Two things i noticed right away,
1. A lack of photos. Staring a post with an image that reflects what the post is about makes it so much more compelling and easier to read. I find it easier on the eye, and gives me an idea right away if I want to read the post.
2. An "about me" section. When I see a new blog I want to know right away what type of blog this is without too much effort or reading. Tell us more about who you are in a concise simple way that can help us know what the blog is all about.
I hope this helps. Looks like you have great information to share, keep at it.
-kim
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